First Cut Feedback

We have had some feedback from our teacher on our first cut of our opening scene. I am happy with our first cut, however we need to add a lot more. For example, when Harry is on the phone to his mother, instead of me filming just him, we are going to add the conversation of his mother and cut between scenes. We will also switch scenes from on the field and at Harry's moms house, we will film a clock and her facial expressions of her being worried to add suspense.